somebody taped his brow

Are you going for a repeat performance, like the one in 4chan?

Well, at any rate, people are nicer here, less trolls.
You need to work on realism before you can do charicature, and your expressions are dead.
The first picture for example, demonstrates this rather well, the two has exactly the same expression.

ara somebody noticed. drew them in school. some 10 years ago!?